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Fear and Toothpaste by *Wings-of-Shadow:iconWings-of-Shadow:



“Tasted?”

“Yes.  Tasted.”  I looked straight into her eyes.

“How do you taste fear?”

“Oh, the fear was only an undertone.  Mostly it was just toothpaste.”

Her nose wrinkled.  “Toothpaste.”

“Yep.  It was minty, with maybe lemon.  Probably Crest.”

“Leave it to you to notice all this.  I don't think many other girls would be thinking about that.”  She shook her head in disbelief.

I shrugged.  “Well, you asked what it was like.”

“You surprised me by doing it in the first place- When did you get so bold?”

“He was cute.  And the mistletoe was up there, anyway.”
©2008-2010 *Wings-of-Shadow
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Author's Comments

The prompt:
"Write about a character who tastes of toothpaste and fear."
(it's from my new writing club, the-literati ~ :iconthe-literati:)

Well, the conversation around town lately has been of mistletoe, chasing, and surprising kisses. When I saw this prompt, I just had to write something.
:smooch:

Another flash fiction, exactly 99 words (not including the title).

Hee <3

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:iconstuckinahole:
LOL very interesting. Nice piece!

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Yes.
:iconwings-of-shadow:
thanks XD I had fun writing it

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I wanna know how forever feels.
:iconf1amedude:
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he's gonna love this.

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Go on, you just keep running...
but I'll always be there to bring you back!
:iconwings-of-shadow:
Who said it was him? And who said it was me?
:ninja:
you draw too many conclusions.

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I wanna know how forever feels.
:iconf1amedude:
riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight.

like it would be anybody else. :XD:

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Go on, you just keep running...
but I'll always be there to bring you back!
:iconwings-of-shadow:
it's under "fiction" for a reason (and not under "fantasy" ha ha)

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I wanna know how forever feels.
:iconf1amedude:
lulz. XD

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Go on, you just keep running...
but I'll always be there to bring you back!
:iconx0x0paperdolls0x0x:
awe!
this is so cute!
i love it!
:D

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maybe it means something....
:iconwings-of-shadow:
thanks ^^

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I wanna know how forever feels.

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